【09–12 新题 T2】成就、影响力与职业
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🗒 本地著名人物
Describe a famous person in your local area
- Who this person is
- What he or she has done
- Why he or she is popular
- And explain how you feel about this person
🗒 克服困难并成功的人
Describe a person you know who did something difficult and was successful
- Who this person is
- What difficult thing this person did
- Why this person was successful
- And explain how you feel about this person
🗒 我帮助改善健康的人
Describe a person whose health and fitness you have helped to improve
- Who this person was
- Why you helped him or her
- How you helped him or her
- And explain whether it was easy or difficult
🗒 欣赏的成功运动员
Describe a successful sportsperson you admire
- Who he or she is
- What you know about him or her
- What he or she is like in real life
- What achievement he or she has made
- And explain why you admire him or her
🗒 想从医的人
Describe a person you know who would like to choose a career in the medical field (e.g. a doctor, a nurse)
- When you knew him or her
- When he or she started to think about that
- What he or she would like to do
- And explain why he or she would like to choose this career
🗒 有成功事业的人
Describe a person you know who has a successful business
- Who this person is
- How you got to know him or her
- Why and how he or she started the business
- What business he or she does
- And explain why you think the business is successful
🗒 在成功公司工作的人
Describe a person who works in a successful company
- Who he or she is
- What he or she does in the company
- What business the company does
- And explain why you think it is a successful company
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【09–12 新题 T2】成就、影响力与职业一句话定位覆盖卡清单核心故事(Part 2 示范稿 · 约 250 词)四点拆解高分词汇银行可复用复杂句型Part 3 延伸框架套用提示【09–12 新题 T2】成就、影响力与职业
目标:Band 6.5–7.0。用一个从小工作室起步的人,覆盖本地名人、成功者、运动员、医疗职业和成功公司。
一句话定位
我的表姐 Lin 从四川小县城带着一只箱子到成都,靠低价健身课程和长期信任做起事业;她帮助我父亲改善健康,也让我理解成功不只是赚钱。
覆盖卡清单
- 本地著名人物 · 2. 克服困难并成功的人 · 3. 我帮助改善健康的人
- 受欣赏的成功运动员 · 5. 想从医的人 · 6. 有成功事业的人 · 7. 在成功公司工作的人
核心故事(Part 2 示范稿 · 约 250 词)
I'd like to talk about my cousin {PERSON}, who did something genuinely difficult
and made it work. Fifteen years ago, she started from {START} and
moved to Chengdu with one suitcase and a part-time job. Today she runs
affordable fitness studios and is known locally for helping ordinary people
become healthier.
Her first studio was tiny: one room above a grocery shop, six second-hand
treadmills and a handwritten timetable. The rent was high and she had almost
no advertising budget. Instead of pretending to be glamorous, she focused on
beginners, offered ten-minute consultations and posted free exercise videos
online. That {STRATEGY} created word of mouth. Within five years she had {RESULT}.
I became involved when my father’s blood pressure rose after years at a desk.
{PERSON} did not shame him or push an extreme diet. She checked his routine, taught
him to walk briskly for thirty minutes and asked me to keep him company. After
three months, he had lost six kilograms and could climb the stairs without
stopping. {PERSON} reminded me that long-term health matters more than a quick
result.
What I admire is her combination of resilience and {VALUE}. She treats
employees fairly, keeps classes affordable and says a business should create
value before profit. If {PERSON} had chased instant popularity, her business would
never have earned lasting trust.四点拆解
- 起点: 15 年前、一个箱子、兼职和楼上的小房间。
- 策略: 不追求奢华,先服务初学者;咨询、短视频和 word of mouth 构成因果链。
- 具体成果: 4 家分店、60 多名员工;父亲 3 个月减重 6 公斤。
- 为什么敬佩: resilience + responsibility;利润让位于长期信任。
可替换槽位
| 槽位 | 含义 | 换题方式 |
|---|---|---|
{PERSON} | 主角 | Lin、运动员、想学医的表妹、成功公司员工 |
{START} | 困难起点 | 小工作室、贫困家庭、第一次比赛、亲人患病 |
{STRATEGY} | 成功方法 | 科学训练、持续学习、客户体验、医院志愿服务 |
{RESULT} | 数字结果 | 4 branches / 60 staff / 6 kilograms / one medal |
{VALUE} | 核心价值 | resilience、service、fairness、public benefit |
高分词汇银行
| 词 / 搭配 | 用法 |
|---|---|
| from absolute scratch | 白手起家 |
| a data-based approach | 科学方法 |
| create word of mouth | 形成口碑 |
| affordable fitness studio | 与健康卡匹配 |
| resilience | 面对困难的恢复力 |
| lasting trust | 长期信任 |
| treat employees fairly | 企业责任 |
| create value before profit | 结尾理念 |
可复用复杂句型
Fifteen years ago, she left..., carrying one suitcase and a part-time job.分词背景。Instead of pretending to be glamorous, she focused on beginners.介词 + 动名词让步。What I admire is her combination of resilience and responsibility.强调句。Although the studio was tiny, its service was unusually personal.让步从句。If she had chased instant popularity, she would never have earned lasting trust.过去虚拟。
Part 3 延伸框架
① What makes a business successful?
I'd argue that a successful business rests on three pillars: a real need, customer satisfaction and employees who feel valued. 先讲产品,再讲体验,最后讲员工;让步:资金和时机有影响,但不能替代稳定品质。
② Should governments support start-ups?
支持可以创造就业和创新,但应是有条件的低息贷款、培训和税收减免,而不是无门槛补贴。可用:Support should reward real innovation, not subsidy-hunting.
③ Is talent important in sport?
天赋只提供 a head start,训练、恢复和抗挫力决定终点。例子:很多早期神童会被坚持训练的 late bloomers 超越。结尾用 talent opens the door; discipline keeps you in the room.
④ Should governments invest in medical research?
应该,因为研究能带来长期公共收益;但预算应兼顾基础研究、基层医疗和药品可及性。让步:昂贵项目不能只追求新闻效果,要有透明评估。
套用提示
- 本地名人:把 Lin 换成社区企业家,加捐助学校和帮助年轻人就业。
- 运动员:把工作室换成训练场,把结果换成比赛奖牌,保留 resilience。
- 想从医的人:把起点换成家人生病,策略换成苦读生物和医院志愿服务。
- 成功公司员工:讲公司文化、客户满意和员工成长,不必硬讲创业。